Taylor’s Reviews > Promised in Fire > Status Update

This book has some flaws. Theres a few weird changes of tense in the book. The chapter will be in third person then randomly use words like "my" and "ours" outside of conversation.

Characters that are strangers to our main characters get referred to by name outside of conversation when the name itself has never been said to this character.

I'm about 55% through and its not a complete turn off, but should be fixed