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Heather
is 66% done
Ok so the speaking is a bit formal in the print version too. I assume it is to help illustrate that they are speaking different languages utilizing some sort of universal translator. But reading it is less off-putting than hearing it. There’s also some incorrect word choice. Insta-love.
— Sep 14, 2023 08:03AM
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Heather
is 35% done
Have switched to kindle version. If the male narrator was the primary one, would have stuck it out. But the story is interesting.
— Sep 13, 2023 11:24PM
Heather
is starting
The dual narration isn’t too bad. But the stilted tone of the female narration is distracting.
The alien world and culture is interesting. Character building is…meh. Not awful, there’s at least an attempt. Probably not helped by the female narrator.
— Sep 13, 2023 11:00PM
The alien world and culture is interesting. Character building is…meh. Not awful, there’s at least an attempt. Probably not helped by the female narrator.
Heather
is starting
Male narrator has great cadence and tone. Not a huge fan of dual narration. Will have to see how it goes with each narrator doing the other main character’s voice.
— Sep 13, 2023 09:07PM
Heather
is starting
Female narrator has a strange cadence with odd pauses, maybe at the end of lines she’s reading instead of end of sentence? But tone is good.
— Sep 13, 2023 08:50PM
