PJ’s Reviews > Far From Innocent > Status Update
PJ
is 45% done
I'm having trouble with the dialogue. It's a bit desperate and sketchy. I can't imagine two people who've just met talking the way they are.
— Jul 06, 2015 06:26PM
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PJ
is 60% done
Speeding my way through this story, but that's sometimes slowly, as I'm forced to reread passages and pages to make sense of them. I've decided I don't care for any of the characters BUT I'm going to keep on keepin' on..
— Jul 07, 2015 12:56PM
PJ
is 31% done
Dex is an GIANT ASSHOLE! I'm glad this is a novella because I couldn't take a whole book of his Prickness!
— Jul 06, 2015 02:43PM
