Jennifer’s Reviews > Strong Hold > Status Update

So I’m listening to the audio and I have to say, if you’re going to write in first person, write in first person. Don’t bounce between 3rd person and first person.

All the chapters from Shayla’s view are first person and all the ones from Zack’s are 3rd person. It pulls me out of the story and has completely ruined this one for me. All the other books were first person.