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is 10% done
So far the overly simplistic writing style bothers me. It sounds as if a child is writing about adults and work interactions based solely on what they've learned of adults in children's movies. Including the mean lady is ugly, mean man is handsome stereotype. The main character starts as utterly bland and uninteresting. I'll give it a bit more.
— Sep 27, 2023 10:50PM
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Jo
is 10% done
So far the overly simplistic writing style bothers me. The author writes about adults and work interactions as if he's a child imagining what it's like to be an adult based on kids movies.. including the ugly mean lady but handsome mean man stereotype. the MC seems quite unlikable. Let's see, I'll give it a bit more
— Sep 27, 2023 10:46PM
