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Okay. Cautiously optimistic that this isn't going to be a continual descent into caricature for Laudine and hopefully Ywain.
— Sep 28, 2023 10:24PM
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Joseph
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"Or else he's a beautiful princess who's under a strange enchantment!"
I'd read a fantasy story like that. Actually, I might write one.
— Oct 01, 2023 09:22PM
I'd read a fantasy story like that. Actually, I might write one.
Joseph
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That's...actually really smart of Ywain. Or just common sense, so that I feel dumb for not thinking of it.
— Oct 01, 2023 09:20PM
Joseph
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This means you didn't even have to write Yvain and Laudine being so stupid. You could have just had him step in to defend the Storm Stone, THEN discover that doing so obligates him to marry her. That's actually a nice setup for an awkward romance.
— Oct 01, 2023 09:19PM
