Brandi’s Reviews > Vengeance Road > Status Update

Hm, I can't tell if this needs more editing or if the things I'm seeing were on purpose. If they were on purpose I can't figure out the reasoning. We're talking things like not capitalizing the name of one horse but capitalizing another, the starts of random sentences lack capitalization and sometimes the vernacular slips - again (people say 'were' but then suddenly there's a 'was'). It's distracting -___-

Well, this is going ok, still not in love. The accent is super western (I is, it were, if'n, ect) but words ending in 'ing' aren't clipped to 'in, and I keep getting tossed out of the story because I clip it in my head to match the vernacular and then my eyes remind me it's not clipped.