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The point of view of my book is first person. Caleb Springer is the main character and talks about how he feels and what he thinks. For example in the book it says "coach signals me the play I tell the team we are going to switch the play up a little bit". This is Caleb talking about what is going through his head.
Oct 02, 2023 09:41AM
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There are some static and dynamic characters in my book. One of the dynamic characters in my book is Caleb Springer. He is the main character in my book. He changes how he feels about football when he finds out his dad has dementia from playing football. His friend Nina is static because she has never never changed her opinion on football being dangerous. These are some static and dynamic characters in my book.
Nov 06, 2023 09:38AM
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I have had a couple of questions throughout my book. I have been wondering if Caleb would get brain damage like his dad. While reading my book it gives examples on how his dad can't remember stuff. His friend also tells him how football is dangerous and can affect his future. They are about to play in the state championship and Caleb says he is looking forward for the season to end. This is a big question I have.
Oct 30, 2023 09:35AM
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Protagonist: The protagonist in my story is Caleb Springer. He is the star freshmen quarterback for his high school. Some of his teammates don't like him because he gets a lot of attention because his dad was in the NFL. One of his teammates says "who are you to talk to me like that." Caleb has to deal with his dad and teammates sweating him throughout the book.
Oct 23, 2023 09:34AM
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Make up 10/9/23 There has been some conflict in my book. There was a fight between Caleb and some of his teammates. This was because they were jealous of the attention he got because his dad was in the NFL. They felt he didn't work hard for the attention he got. Even though he cannot help it they were still mad at him.
Oct 16, 2023 09:47AM
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There have been multiple predictions I have made. One of them is I predicted when they almost lost the football game. Talking about their practices before the game it said they took a bad team lightly. I thought they would either barely win or lose. It was saying how the coach was getting mad because they were joking in practice. I thought they would barely win or lose because of that.
Oct 16, 2023 09:35AM
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Jackson Gregory
Jackson Gregory is on page 92 of 288
Make up 9/26 One of my book's known settings is Walthorne High School. I do not think that is a real high school because my book is realistic fiction. The time is somewhere in the 2000s because it says his dad retired from playing football in 2005.
Oct 02, 2023 09:48AM
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Jackson Gregory
Jackson Gregory is on page 92 of 288
The point of view of my book is first person. Caleb Springer the main character and is telling the story. I know this because he uses the words I and me. He also talks about how he feels and what he thinks.
Oct 02, 2023 09:32AM
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Make up 9/18 My book's genre is about sports. It is about how the son of a former NFL football player's son is getting a lot of attention because he is his son. It also talks about how he is very injury prone and is being pressured to play through it because of his dad.
Sep 27, 2023 09:42AM
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