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Hailey Ard
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The number of times “lay down my life for her” and “slides the knife across her neck from one side to the other in a swift motion” has been used is extremely annoying. It’s extremely repetitive. The story line has been very skippy and jumbled. Also, most of the scenes are as if they were pulled right from a discussion board talking about readers favorite book scenes, trying to fit as many as possible.
— Oct 02, 2023 10:45AM
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Hailey Ard
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The writing is extremely juvenile. Also? There are so many sentences that go on and on and on where you can barely understand what’s happening. The settings also aren’t very well laid out.
— Oct 02, 2023 10:54AM
