Sarah’s Reviews > In the Arms of an Android > Status Update

Android MMC (yay) describing his friends during some pg 1 inner monologue, proceeds to mention how his demeanor is more rigid than his friends, and starts thinking about what he looks like.

So…immediate eye roll from me. God forbid we get to know the character naturally through the book. Who inner monologues that they’re more rigid than their friends? Subtly is a lost art in the self-pub world, I swear…