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Eh...
I really liked Ford, but Chrissy, not so much. She was OTT obsessive and seemed to think her only worth was as a baby maker and Mom.
Re: the writing ~ the repetition was really annoying - as if we couldn't remember from one chapter to the next what both characters' hang ups were. Repeating them in multiple chapters was majorly annoying. The author needed an editor that wasn't afraid to redline...
— Oct 14, 2023 03:11PM
I really liked Ford, but Chrissy, not so much. She was OTT obsessive and seemed to think her only worth was as a baby maker and Mom.
Re: the writing ~ the repetition was really annoying - as if we couldn't remember from one chapter to the next what both characters' hang ups were. Repeating them in multiple chapters was majorly annoying. The author needed an editor that wasn't afraid to redline...
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