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I'm so close to my evil review 🐍 It must happen this year

Lol, a phrase word for word from Wolf at the door. Not that it's super original, but SUS!

Check your privilege moment: the ultimate tragedy, the most horrific thing that ever happened to the MC in this fantasy-racist, post-war world is that he has never been to the cookout. (It's really not, but the amount of drama here kind of shows the lack of awareness, experience from the author, lack of references maybe).

Дано: это постапокалипсис с расовым неравенством, ГГ - 34 годика, он из низшего сословия, с детства закаленный всеми видами абьюза и потерь, он ежедневно сражается с монстрами в компании, которой не может доверять, участвует в подпольной "дороге свободы".
Ииии он только что захныкал, потому что сексуальный мужик про него плохо подумал.
Все плохо.

Honestly deciding if I should DNF, or hate read just to be able to rate it :D

Really bad. Bad fanfiction bad. Lore dump in the beginning, before I even care. And than absolutely unbelievable characters, are they helpless, do they have a lot of influence? It's 180 on 180. MC "saves" a kid he just met (by using influence he supposedly doesn't have) from abusive situation, and than puts some other person in that same situation - what a hero, and here we also find out he can choose his postings.