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opening the story with a mass murder is a great hook. cause and effect writing the death of the auraseers, causing sonya to be taken to the palace is morbid but pretty good.
hmm, wondering who this Tosya this and if he will make an appearance. as well as the possible real brother of sonya.
— Oct 15, 2023 11:00PM
hmm, wondering who this Tosya this and if he will make an appearance. as well as the possible real brother of sonya.
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quinn
is 66% done
ohh so is tosya's novel something like the communist manifesto? seeing that the world is sort of like russia, and the shenglin is seemingly china, im getting the hint that we are getting political and hitting some pretty accurate historical marks.
— Oct 18, 2023 02:36AM
