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Man…. Can someone just give this girl a hug? Don’t get me wrong I’m a huge fan of fucked up stuff, but this one is really missing the mark for me. Something I hate in “dark” novels is when it’s just…. Like a barrage of abuse and trauma. It makes it get super old, repetitive, and kind of dreary (in a boring way- rather then exciting)
Some balance with tenderness and aftercare would be much appreciated.
Oct 17, 2023 06:27AM
The Sinner (L.O.R.D.S., #2)

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Isabelle Fallu Also I don’t know if it’s a regional dialect thing but it’s called a shower head…. Not a “sprayer”. Or just say “she stood under the spray” after you’ve already mentioned the character is getting into the shower. There’s other little grammatical things that pop out- I’m listening to the audio book and you can even hear the voice actors stuttering them when they know it’s incorrect but read it the way it’s written.
Also all the little shout outs to ryat and events of the first book are super annoying. I know I’m just ranting to myself here but alas.


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