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Mallika is on page 87 of 348
The story is an interesting one and I'm keen to know where it goes. However, many of the word choices and sentence structures make me disoriented while reading... I have to pause and reread sometimes to be sure I know what the author is trying to say. This book definitely needs editing in order to shine.
Oct 19, 2023 11:40AM
Curse of Shadows and Thorns (The Broken Kingdoms, #1)

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