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These two are very annoying

Deus ex womena🙄

This story is kind of boring. It's giving nothing new. It's similar to the others but they're better than it.

What is this awkward conversation? Ugh

I don't like that the driving force of the characters attraction to each other is described as, “that sudden surge of lust.” Why sudden? Just build something for real.

And this line, my god, “Rough. Ravenous. Just on the edge of rough.” But like, why just on the edge? You already said rough smh.

What in the out of left field kiss is this? I have never seen someone's body more controlled than forces unknown before, and this is not even pnr. What? Lol!