Mfelovesstories:)’s Reviews > A Gargoyle's Delight > Status Update
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is 35% done
He’s so close to breaking. I can break him. If I can break him, then he can shatter me, and then maybe... Maybe some of this will make sense. Maybe all of it will.
WTF is this? What about having a conversation?? What is the whack logic?
— Oct 27, 2023 04:32PM
WTF is this? What about having a conversation?? What is the whack logic?
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Mfelovesstories:)
is 60% done
People are getting hurt and this girl is wondering if the gargoyle will be impressed by her lingerie?? It makes zero sense. What was the thought process between these two authors? I can't imagine how they'd think together and come up with this. What the hell?
— Oct 28, 2023 01:56AM
Mfelovesstories:)
is 34% done
Is this running scene supposed to mean something? The fmc is acting very irrationally. She had questions and now she's running all over the place. It doesn't make sense at all.
— Oct 27, 2023 04:26PM
Mfelovesstories:)
is 34% done
Is this running scene supposed to mean something? The fmc is acting very irrationally. She had questions and now she's running all over the place. It doesn't make sense at all.
— Oct 27, 2023 04:26PM
Mfelovesstories:)
is 31% done
There's too much narration breaking the dialogue. Not enough talk, too much thinking.
— Oct 27, 2023 04:08PM