Mfelovesstories:)’s Reviews > Uncovering Lily > Status Update
Mfelovesstories:)
is 17% done
He's at least not old, fat or a disgusting combination of the two.
Is this ageism and fatphobia? I'm not sure, but it rubbed me the wrong way.
— Oct 31, 2023 01:23AM
Is this ageism and fatphobia? I'm not sure, but it rubbed me the wrong way.
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Mfelovesstories:)
is 20% done
I'm sorry? Am I reading this right? This rando dude aka mmc recognises his friend's sister at a brothel in China where she is kidnapped and trafficked to. When he gets time alone with her, she even admits to this. And his next action is to grope her?? WTF is this???
— Oct 31, 2023 01:30AM
Mfelovesstories:)
is 18% done
Why is he pulling her hair to the point of pain?? Wut
— Oct 31, 2023 01:25AM
Mfelovesstories:)
is 16% done
There's a lot of unnecessary rambling. We're mid-scene and the author cuts of the interaction between two characters to give us a breakdown we didn't need. The characters are on pause while we review what happened earlier. Makes for a rough reading experience.
— Oct 31, 2023 01:19AM
Mfelovesstories:)
is 13% done
Definitely not my type. I prefer my women with a natural look.
His women? It's a brothel, lol. Also, his not like other men🥴
— Oct 31, 2023 01:11AM
His women? It's a brothel, lol. Also, his not like other men🥴