Kathleen’s Reviews > Fractured Souls > Status Update
Kathleen
is 76% done
Started out so well! Hit 65% and the poorly written sex scenes started.
- too much focus on sex
- too many exclamation points
- too many “the Emprean said”, “the Aerial said”
- Cassius acting like simpering milquetoast
— Nov 03, 2023 09:41PM
- too much focus on sex
- too many exclamation points
- too many “the Emprean said”, “the Aerial said”
- Cassius acting like simpering milquetoast
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