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Rachel
is 71% done
There’s a difference between mean and strict. Their reaction when she was in the “hospital” was just pure mean. So much yelling and swearing. No care, no soft words. They didn’t even bring her the elephant!
— Nov 05, 2023 06:50PM
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Rachel
is 49% done
Honestly very dissapointed in Miles. I hate the pushing them away for their own good trope. And then you make a point that she has never called you but oh she can wait. I heavily blame him for what happened to her.
Also I do not loving this writing. Too much repetition and it just sounds clunky.
— Nov 05, 2023 05:18PM
Also I do not loving this writing. Too much repetition and it just sounds clunky.