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Vanna
is 12% done
Even SHE says she is unlikely to succeed, girl why are you here? Dain gave you the out. This seems fruitless, and obviously she will succeed, of course, but there is such doubt in her that I have, bc of logistics.
Also, is this her diary? Because how is all of this transcripted, from dialogue to inner thoughts? It's all just unbelievable.
— Nov 07, 2023 04:15PM
Also, is this her diary? Because how is all of this transcripted, from dialogue to inner thoughts? It's all just unbelievable.
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Vanna
is 74% done
Nonfantasy, romance readers be trifling. How yall saying this is smutty when there hasn't even been a sex scene and we have a little over a tenth of the book left
— Nov 20, 2023 10:58AM
Vanna
is 71% done
Violet is the absolute worst FMC, like she is handed everything. This saddle that she quotes "not allowed". Riorson, who is not only a better character but more deserving than her.
— Nov 19, 2023 06:09AM
Vanna
is 46% done
The writing in regards to the attractiveness of Xaden is so bad. And this really reminds me of just trashy romance novels
— Nov 14, 2023 02:04PM
Vanna
is 19% done
I'm sick of Jack Barlowe, like maybe it's the humiliation, but for him to have set his sights on her before that is just eye-rolling. I hate this man
— Nov 08, 2023 03:44PM
Vanna
is 12% done
History is unnaturally given through dialogue to self through nervous spouts. Repeated information, like when Rhiannon talks about overhearing that other years can repeat the first year when literally it was information already given not so long ago to the reader. Violet's disability doesn't align coherently with her mother forcing her to join, and then her willingness to participate. No motive or interest in her.
— Nov 07, 2023 02:37PM
