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Rayne
is 35% done
The character is refusing to grow up and realize it’s just not about her. Ewww I hate lying, awww I have to estrange my friends so I don’t lie. The “ bad guy “ in this one has devolved into to a 1 dimensional psychopath. I hate that… and the male character has turned into a whipped boy pleasing his psychotic demanding girlfriend.
— Nov 08, 2023 09:58PM
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Rayne
is 36% done
Also wondering how these dragons are so powerful and terrifying yet people think they can push them around. Secondly things need to be discovered. Aren’t being said between the Mc’s like she needs to learn shielding … then why isn’t her wise powerful ancient dragon teaching her? I honestly thought the dragons would become more enfolded with mcs learning but no….
— Nov 08, 2023 10:01PM
Rayne
is 25% done
Right now I am annoyed and contemplating not finishing. I loved book one, but than book two the main character is ridiculously childish. She complains about her bf not being honest about things he literally cannot discuss, she holds a grudge for something her bf kept secret from her. Not differentiating between his secrets and other people secrets. She whines and yaps about the same thing over and over again
— Nov 08, 2023 09:54PM
