Angela’s Reviews > Broken Lands > Status Update

I'm a huge fan of JM, but I do have one pet peeve when it comes to his writing style. Perfect example in Chap 33, an attack on Reclamation Group outside of large concrete structure. JM went through multiple paragraphs/two chapters for one fight scene. The fight scene is minor in terms of the overall story. But it just kept going like a major showdown, like often at the end of a story. JM drags on and on at times.