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Aayesha
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'Max is protective towards you.'
'He was protective towards her.'
'WE FREAKING GOT THAT HE'S PROTECTIVE TOWARDS HER THE FIRST TIME, THERE WAS NO NEED TO MENTION IT 30 TIMES AFTER.'
— Aug 05, 2015 01:31AM
'He was protective towards her.'
'WE FREAKING GOT THAT HE'S PROTECTIVE TOWARDS HER THE FIRST TIME, THERE WAS NO NEED TO MENTION IT 30 TIMES AFTER.'
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Aayesha
is 34% done
Okay, the amateur, unprofessional writing is getting on my nerves.
— Aug 05, 2015 01:51AM
Aayesha
is 18% done
The writing is a bit amateur. It's not bad enough for me to stop reading altogether, but it is irritating and lessens the credibility.
It didn‘t escape Nancy that she was very naïve either.
The h has been called sweet and naive at least 10 times already - I prefer an author to show me her naivety and sweetness, not tell me.
— Aug 05, 2015 12:47AM
It didn‘t escape Nancy that she was very naïve either.
The h has been called sweet and naive at least 10 times already - I prefer an author to show me her naivety and sweetness, not tell me.
Aayesha
is 10% done
I do not like knowing the hero's POV. I definitely do not like knowing that he likes her, and has 'plans' for her. Ugh, why why did it have to have the hero's POV? It seemed so promising :(
— Aug 04, 2015 11:10PM
