Mari’s Reviews > Fourth Wing > Status Update

My problem with Fourth Wing is probably due to its timeline… It’s been almost 100 pages, and we’re still on the SECOND DAY!
Like, I get it, so much happens in a span of a week, but it doesn’t help with the flow of the book. For dozens of pages there’s passed a day, and in two pages we’ve suddenly skipped months. It’s weird, and easily fixed.

I think she tries to introduce too much in too little time, and not well enough.
I don’t think her exposition methods are well done