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Mari
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My problem with Fourth Wing is probably due to its timeline… It’s been almost 100 pages, and we’re still on the SECOND DAY!
Like, I get it, so much happens in a span of a week, but it doesn’t help with the flow of the book. For dozens of pages there’s passed a day, and in two pages we’ve suddenly skipped months. It’s weird, and easily fixed.
— Nov 20, 2023 06:20PM
Like, I get it, so much happens in a span of a week, but it doesn’t help with the flow of the book. For dozens of pages there’s passed a day, and in two pages we’ve suddenly skipped months. It’s weird, and easily fixed.
Mari
is on page 11 of 646
I think she tries to introduce too much in too little time, and not well enough.
I don’t think her exposition methods are well done
— Nov 14, 2023 08:16AM
I don’t think her exposition methods are well done

