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is 90% done
I never fully understood the whole "show, don't tell" thing until this book. It feels like a short story with past pools copy and pasted in. These are conversations Hamilton should be having with herself, and then writing scenes around. I don't want to hear that vampires suck blood. I want to see it. There is no emotion in didactic dialogue.
— Aug 11, 2015 07:49PM
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