Dallas’s Reviews > Bending All the Rules > Status Update
Dallas
is 4% done
I like the rarer use of a male point of view to open the story. Quite a few details that are woven in nicely and doing a good job of fleshing out the POV character
— Aug 12, 2015 10:24PM
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Dallas
is 84% done
I like that not only does she have curves, but she has no thigh gap and some stretch marks too. This feels like a real woman rather than just a fantasy. Nice.
— Aug 12, 2015 11:49PM
Dallas
is 13% done
Some repetitive/extraneous words that could be cut, but I like the voice of Cora. Easy to believe and get on board with so far. Some good specific details too.
— Aug 12, 2015 10:34PM
