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JD Shaffer
is 99% done
Finished reading it... some decent action in the last 40%, then a super wimpy, lazy ending. *sigh* Felt more like a "I need the money" book than one from the heart and mind.
— Nov 26, 2023 04:14AM
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JD Shaffer
is 45% done
First, I just want to say I LOVED all the other MurderBot stories. I read all of them twice, back-to-back, then read them in Japanese, then again in English. So I have read all the other books about five times in total.
And yet, I'm not enjoying this one. The writing feels clunky and stuttered. The story feels slow, the descriptions too messy, and MB seems to swear a LOT more than before. Not enjoying this one yet.
— Nov 26, 2023 12:31AM
And yet, I'm not enjoying this one. The writing feels clunky and stuttered. The story feels slow, the descriptions too messy, and MB seems to swear a LOT more than before. Not enjoying this one yet.

