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Rachel
is on page 42 of 127
His own brain was mostly
A landscape of chasms.
He descended, again
And again, clutching
Notebook and pen,
To the bottom
Of the deepest and darkest
— Nov 26, 2023 07:37PM
A landscape of chasms.
He descended, again
And again, clutching
Notebook and pen,
To the bottom
Of the deepest and darkest
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Rachel
is on page 116 of 127
Into 1000 pieces
Must this rending really proceeded mending?
Now I start to re-gather,
And when
Maybe it will be larger –
1001
Other poems are short and sharp – arrows aim of the heart, as of the purpose of beauty was to hurt me more alive
Life prefers the running water to the still; in its world, tulips only bloom to fade
— Nov 30, 2023 06:41AM
Must this rending really proceeded mending?
Now I start to re-gather,
And when
Maybe it will be larger –
1001
Other poems are short and sharp – arrows aim of the heart, as of the purpose of beauty was to hurt me more alive
Life prefers the running water to the still; in its world, tulips only bloom to fade
Rachel
is on page 105 of 127
Remember: every fist began as an open hand. Even a bridge is a ledge if you straight to its edge.
Who knew each had the power to save what mattered
Rather what was intimate, personal, scaled to the human.
Being alive is probably the best that most of us can accomplish, the gratitude for what we received is the least we can feel
— Nov 30, 2023 06:36AM
Who knew each had the power to save what mattered
Rather what was intimate, personal, scaled to the human.
Being alive is probably the best that most of us can accomplish, the gratitude for what we received is the least we can feel
Rachel
is on page 88 of 127
You should change the name of the game, and even the game can change.
Grieving over something, you never even knew you loved colon that gloomy house of your childhood, where you were mostly miserable.
They get the facts, but they don’t get the mystery
Mines are deeper than mines. And twice as dark.
— Nov 30, 2023 06:29AM
Grieving over something, you never even knew you loved colon that gloomy house of your childhood, where you were mostly miserable.
They get the facts, but they don’t get the mystery
Mines are deeper than mines. And twice as dark.
Rachel
is on page 30 of 127
Hi, who saw neither rapture nor fracture.
Now the question is: what to do with shatter?
“ a spiritual paradox that language aches to reveal period”
— Nov 26, 2023 07:10PM
Now the question is: what to do with shatter?
“ a spiritual paradox that language aches to reveal period”

