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So far it’s a bit meh but not enough to make me put it down. The only thing I find extremely annoying is the past and present tense back and forth in the writing. It’s in first person saying “I, me, my” but also said things like “we stared at each other” when it’s something she’s actively doing. It just made my brain itch. It keeps happening.
Nov 26, 2023 09:25PM
The Sutra of Spring (Solstice Shield, #1)

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