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And why in tf are we ceaselessly reminded of Tom's "homely face" or "homely figure"? Why cant he just be Tom?
Also, he's poor. Why doesnt he speak like it? "My lord"? It would be "m'lord"
I'm irked.
— Dec 04, 2023 10:08PM
Also, he's poor. Why doesnt he speak like it? "My lord"? It would be "m'lord"
I'm irked.
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This is not going how I imagined at all and I'm not loving it. Lol
— Dec 05, 2023 06:51AM
Shenanigans
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She went from being insulted and assuming he meant to give her jewels "like a mistress" and then immediately to being turned on and kissing him. This scene is disconnected and disjointed. Who tf let this by in editing?
— Dec 04, 2023 10:06PM
