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is 33% done
Non of the villains are threatening anymore.
Marcus almost completely stopped interacting with helena as soon as she got her own pov. In book one they had some secrets and pressure going on. But none if this is paid off here. Instead only new setups are created.
Elias mother just conveniently "spared" him with poisoning him instead of directly killing him even if she could've.
— Dec 07, 2023 05:02PM
Marcus almost completely stopped interacting with helena as soon as she got her own pov. In book one they had some secrets and pressure going on. But none if this is paid off here. Instead only new setups are created.
Elias mother just conveniently "spared" him with poisoning him instead of directly killing him even if she could've.
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is 33% done
Boring. But I can't pin point what about it makes it boring.
The setup, the world building and characters are so well done but then this is what you decide on the story to be? This is what you give those characters to do and to think about?
I lost all sense of urgency.
— Dec 07, 2023 04:49PM
The setup, the world building and characters are so well done but then this is what you decide on the story to be? This is what you give those characters to do and to think about?
I lost all sense of urgency.
