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Libby
is 66% done
The only reason I'm still going is that I paid money for this book. Literally the first 2/3 of this book is exposition, inane conversation and internal monologues. The amount of "things actually happening" could probably be contained in 10 pages or less. I will probably give up on this series after I finish this book.
— Dec 12, 2023 01:13PM
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Libby
is 17% done
Oh no...Jennifer. Did you forget to hire an editor again? The first two books of this series were actually pretty good. Unlike Blood and Ash which I rage quit at book four.
Anyway, so far it is waaaaaay too wordy. Way too much internal monologue. Someone said it get's better 2/3 of the way in, but honestly it just seems like stockholm sydrome at that point.
— Dec 08, 2023 01:17PM
Anyway, so far it is waaaaaay too wordy. Way too much internal monologue. Someone said it get's better 2/3 of the way in, but honestly it just seems like stockholm sydrome at that point.
