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Clo 소라
is on page 322 of 517
it just doesn’t make sense that anna and leo would fall apart to this extent after one singular moment of miscommunication. everything we’ve seen of their relationship so far shows that it’s one built on frank honesty, so it’s a gross manipulation of their relationship for neither of them (or really both of them) to try and talk this through IMMEDIATELY. miscommunication trope done fucking h o r r i b l y
— Dec 15, 2023 02:17PM
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Clo 소라
is on page 501 of 517
i’m finishing this book just because of how close to the end i am, but then i’m never reading anything by this author again because of how disgusting this one sex scene is. both technically trash and morally fucking gross at the same time.
— Dec 15, 2023 03:43PM
Clo 소라
is on page 488 of 517
“We’re face to face, looking into each other’s eyes. Slowly, Leo runs his tongue over my lips, tasting me. Then he kisses me, fully and deeply. I’ve never kissed someone like this, our mouths wide open, our tongues delving deep, our breath mixing ”
bro are you 9 years old?? this is such bad descriptive work that it actually made me laugh out loud
— Dec 15, 2023 03:39PM
bro are you 9 years old?? this is such bad descriptive work that it actually made me laugh out loud
Clo 소라
is on page 481 of 517
“in delicious contrast to his tongue, which slips into my mouth, massaging my own.”
yep, called it. absolutely vile.
— Dec 15, 2023 03:36PM
yep, called it. absolutely vile.
Clo 소라
is on page 380 of 517
oh cool and now dean is fully SAing anna yet again. unless this book ends with leo having slit dean’s throat i’m not reading the next one
— Dec 15, 2023 02:42PM
Clo 소라
is on page 344 of 517
aaaaaand somehow, dean is an even worse person than we’d already known
— Dec 15, 2023 02:41PM
Clo 소라
is on page 304 of 517
if things went any further than anna punching dean in the face i’m going to kms
— Dec 15, 2023 02:11PM
Clo 소라
is on page 303 of 517
this is fucking gross. leo just got SA’d because of dean and now dean follows anna to SA her, knowing she’s vulnerable because of what he orchestrated between anna and leo??? what a fucking scumbag
— Dec 15, 2023 02:10PM
Clo 소라
is on page 195 of 517
it was noted literally 4 pages ago that Dean and Anna are fighting to be top of their class and now it’s repeated again. from the same person’s pov. again; first draft levels of sloppiness
— Dec 15, 2023 01:31PM
Clo 소라
is on page 145 of 517
the author describing attraction as “an uncomfortable squeezing in my guts” is definitely a spoiler for how badly they’ll write sex scenes
— Dec 15, 2023 01:11PM
Clo 소라
is on page 106 of 517
instant indication of a lazy and bad writer: “i’m loving ….”
— Dec 15, 2023 12:52PM
