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This is really poor so far. It took the weaknesses of the first book and multiplied them. Still not enough background info for the reader, and when there is any, it's summarized via a tell not show method. The main character still has grown since accepting his kinghood. He was supposed to be a 25 year old man in the first book, but in both books he acts like a fifteen year old kid.
— Dec 22, 2023 11:44PM
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