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It's so weird how everything of interest happened in the past and the only thing that has to happen in the present is for them to finally talk. Even the thing with all the murders, which could have been the main issue to solve in the present, just fell into place the last few pages.

Wow, some pages in Dante acknowledges that they don't talk because they are too prideful. But now they both promised to finally talk to each other. And then they still don't talk, because they have to get intimate.
Infuriating.

I know both of them are way to prideful to actually talk to each other. But then please acknowledge that this is the reason why they don't resolve the whole conflict of the book with a single conversation. It is okay. I get it they are still young. Just let the characters tell us why they can't bring it over them to talk about their mistakes.