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Abi
is on page 180 of 464
Start was strong. Not feeling Ahn's and Altan's first interaction. Ahn is kind of disappointing now. I'd like to get more action from her. She started off as this bad ass and feels like a shell of that.
Altan is fine. I don't feel anything in particular for him. I wonder if it's because I feel disconnected from Ahn now that she left the village.
Side characters are really enjoyable. They drive the story way more.
— Jan 02, 2024 09:36PM
Altan is fine. I don't feel anything in particular for him. I wonder if it's because I feel disconnected from Ahn now that she left the village.
Side characters are really enjoyable. They drive the story way more.
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Abi
is on page 392 of 464
If Altan and Ahn live each other, then why is Altan still like "I could kill her grandmother" this late in the story when he's rescuing her from the prison. The characters just don't seem consistent.
— Jan 05, 2024 06:27PM
Abi
is on page 268 of 464
Ahn and Altan's relationship feels so superficial. They have no chemistry even though the book is trying to force it. Disappointing.
— Jan 03, 2024 11:55AM
