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This is what we call a straight book for straight people (I am not the target audience)
— Jan 07, 2024 04:04PM
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I need to vent my frustrations before power through and finish this book:
1) The writing feels, disorganized. I can’t tell if the author wants this characters to act like High Fantasy nobility or Romantasy love interests, and personally I do not find these genres compatible in one story as they appeal to often very different audiences
2) There is not much showing, mostly telling
3) Elm best boy though for real
— Jan 13, 2024 05:02PM
1) The writing feels, disorganized. I can’t tell if the author wants this characters to act like High Fantasy nobility or Romantasy love interests, and personally I do not find these genres compatible in one story as they appeal to often very different audiences
2) There is not much showing, mostly telling
3) Elm best boy though for real