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Too much telling and not enough showing.
Also on page 95, was “He (William) pictured his wife and Julia (his wife) sleeping…” an editorial fail or intentional?
— Jan 08, 2024 03:49PM
Also on page 95, was “He (William) pictured his wife and Julia (his wife) sleeping…” an editorial fail or intentional?
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