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This went from 3 stars to a 2 star DNF, so I'm going to gently put it away.
I get that a lot of fanfiction is pantsing, but it was really obvious here. The "just kiss" moments were way too forced, like Laura because one big annoying excuse. I also got tired of the constant snarling and overall bitterness in both Derek and Stiles. Overuse of "fucking" as an adjective devalued its impact. It's just so MEH.
— Sep 15, 2015 02:28PM
I get that a lot of fanfiction is pantsing, but it was really obvious here. The "just kiss" moments were way too forced, like Laura because one big annoying excuse. I also got tired of the constant snarling and overall bitterness in both Derek and Stiles. Overuse of "fucking" as an adjective devalued its impact. It's just so MEH.
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Adrian Fridge
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Snarl this, snarl that. Can someone not snarl something out? Nope.
I dunno. The plot is okay, but there are way too many spelling mistakes and word choice issues.
— Sep 12, 2015 08:30PM
I dunno. The plot is okay, but there are way too many spelling mistakes and word choice issues.
