Meep’s Reviews > Honey Mead Murder > Status Update
Meep
is 40% done
Not gelling with the writing. Mystery is so obvious there nothing to investigate. Procedure is off.
There's smirking and snickering.
— Jan 10, 2024 12:51PM
There's smirking and snickering.
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Meep
is 51% done
They're cleaning up, despite crime tape being up, then phoning the police about evidence they find.
This story is weak.
— Jan 10, 2024 03:11PM
This story is weak.
Meep
is 31% done
Writing is very simple, lots of extraneous detail that stops the story flow.
Dry ice at a Mead tasting? In a punch, Cocktail bar maybe, but at a small specialised home brewery?
Sis-in-law by be a whizz at pairing nibbles but her aesthetic needs work.
— Jan 10, 2024 12:15PM
Dry ice at a Mead tasting? In a punch, Cocktail bar maybe, but at a small specialised home brewery?
Sis-in-law by be a whizz at pairing nibbles but her aesthetic needs work.
Meep
is 14% done
Expectations are low, this is very simply written, but I love Bees, Dogs and Cosy mysteries so this is a must read for me.
— Jan 10, 2024 09:56AM
