LB’s Reviews > The Unlovely Bride > Status Update

Overall pretty good, didn’t meet the level of substitute bride for the prize fighter, mostly because the story didn’t feel as tight and Garmin wasn’t as much of a Teddy bear for Lenora as Ben was. Could have used more time with the couple than the different side characters.

This book is lulling for me, I’m not getting enough from Lenora and Garmin, too much with secondary characters, needs some editing. The language feels off at some points, like they’re using phrases that are too modern. Overall feels a little amateurish

Why shouldn’t she rely on him? Already forget his plan. Garmin is only slightly leas of a simp for Lenora, but I think he’s getting there.

I don’t think I’ve ever read an author so fixated on washing