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Country Goose
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" Both of her breasts swam out and deflated against her thin chest." How is this considered sexy?
— Sep 17, 2015 05:38AM
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Country Goose
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"The accusation hit home, and he sat down on the couch and planted his hands between his head." That's some talent he's got there......
— Sep 17, 2015 05:32AM
Country Goose
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"With eager and tempered balance he found the fallen cedar tree across the creek that he had used to cross it and carefully walked across it, his boots holding on the slick bark." This sentence alone indicates an author who cannot entrap the audience into the bliss of fantasy. I am not impressed.
— Sep 15, 2015 09:51PM
Country Goose
is 2% done
The first three pages hold more grammatical mistakes than the entire book I just finished. Does not bode well for the rest.
— Sep 15, 2015 09:47PM
