Wilmar Luna’s Reviews > Beasthood > Status Update

Well, this book done pissed me off with the lack of werewolves and how boring it is. The stars are coming off.

I'm this far in and only now got to read about a werewolf? That's like writing a book about vampires except they don't become vampiric until the end of the book. What a misleading premise!

I'm almost halfway through with this book. Where the eff are the werewolves? For a book about werewolves it sure takes a long f-ing time to get to one.

The pacing of this book is agonizingly slow and the writing is clumsy.

If this doesn't start to improve by the halfway mark, stars are going to start coming off.

So far, the book's enjoyable but I'm having a few issues that are bugging me about it.

1.) There's way too much abrupt head hopping. First we're in Jaz's head, then we're in Driver's head, etc. All in one scene. BAD!

2.) The chapter where they are driving in the car feels pointless. Should have cut straight to her feeling sick.

3.) Too much telegraphing. Which is making the plot feel predictable.

Read K.S. Marsden's review. Had to check this out too. Boy I've got a lot of books to get through now!