Status Updates From Beasthood (The Hidden Blood...

Wow. Um, spoilers. The main character never turned into a dang werewolf! WHAT A RIP OFF! The stars are falling.

Well, this book done pissed me off with the lack of werewolves and how boring it is. The stars are coming off.

I'm this far in and only now got to read about a werewolf? That's like writing a book about vampires except they don't become vampiric until the end of the book. What a misleading premise!

I'm almost halfway through with this book. Where the eff are the werewolves? For a book about werewolves it sure takes a long f-ing time to get to one.

The pacing of this book is agonizingly slow and the writing is clumsy.

If this doesn't start to improve by the halfway mark, stars are going to start coming off.

So far, the book's enjoyable but I'm having a few issues that are bugging me about it.

1.) There's way too much abrupt head hopping. First we're in Jaz's head, then we're in Driver's head, etc. All in one scene. BAD!

2.) The chapter where they are driving in the car feels pointless. Should have cut straight to her feeling sick.

3.) Too much telegraphing. Which is making the plot feel predictable.

Oh gawd, I'm only halfway through...

The story has potential, but it's dragging

I have no idea who half these people are, what the hierarchy is, who's in charge, why they are doing things the way they are and expecting them to work out in the end. I'm confused.

Oh, the head hopping and internal thoughts are already getting on my nerves. Here's hoping it smooths out a bit.

Read K.S. Marsden's review. Had to check this out too. Boy I've got a lot of books to get through now!

can't wait to start. sounded really good

“Wow, I'm surprised that you were even able to form such a long sentence. Did it hurt your head?” she remarked sardonically.
Fraya glowered at her. Jaz was too angry to feel scared though Fraya was an intimidating woman.
“Keep it up, and it's your head that'll be hurting!” Fraya barked.
Jaz smiled. “So you admit it?”
Fraya frowned, confused.
Jaz helped her out. “Your head hurts, huh?”

Soo... bored...