Alison Beechner’s Reviews > Kingdom of Embers > Status Update
Alison Beechner
is 89% done
This book should have been dual POV. this scene should have been included somehow. Just jump right in in there
— Jan 20, 2024 12:31AM
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Alison Beechner
is 67% done
It's weird how big moments (first seeing him, her first kiss) are written like they're no big deal. There's not much build up or going into much detail in the moment.
— Jan 19, 2024 10:13PM
Alison Beechner
is 36% done
Going okay. Occasionally the writing feels a little choppy or a little rushed. Occasionally there are small inconsistencies, continuity errors. But not so much that I can't over look it since the story is interesting.
— Jan 18, 2024 10:07PM
