Darlene Barrett’s Reviews > The Alpine Winter > Status Update
Darlene Barrett
is 23% done
At 23%, characters still introduced too rapidly. Makes one feel like an unwelcome visitor. Story otherwise ok.
— Sep 27, 2015 10:50AM
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Darlene Barrett
is 6% done
Early on, way too many characters introduced. Very confusing.
— Sep 26, 2015 03:55PM
