Heathen Nicholson’s Reviews > Darkness Falls > Status Update

The crude comments could've been finessed a little better. I like the story and where it's going, I just can't get past the "I want to stick my cock in her wet, juicy pussy" which is said allot. Really, you couldn't come up with something better than that? It throws me for a loop because most of it is written really well but then we digress to the crude mannerisms.