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The first one hundred pages had me hooked. Unfortunately, the MC feels out of place in the narrative. Nobody remains gullible after the shit she went through.
The setting/plot is creative NGL but the characters feel so out of place with the plot. Like how they react and think
— Jan 27, 2024 10:15AM
The setting/plot is creative NGL but the characters feel so out of place with the plot. Like how they react and think
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The second half lost me. I was bombarded with everything from every direction.
So much potential ruined by insta love, poor pacing, weak worldbuilding and all over the place magic system
— Jan 27, 2024 05:36PM
So much potential ruined by insta love, poor pacing, weak worldbuilding and all over the place magic system
