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I've been trying to find horror novels with a music festival setting and this is the only one I've been able to find.
The movie Midsommer (2019) was recced to me. Premise is a couple travels to Sweden for a festival, they end up in a cult that says they practice paganism.
— Feb 01, 2024 07:09AM
The movie Midsommer (2019) was recced to me. Premise is a couple travels to Sweden for a festival, they end up in a cult that says they practice paganism.
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Meredith is a hot mess
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The authors are struggling describing the music.
— Feb 01, 2024 07:42AM
Meredith is a hot mess
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Ellie closes her eyes to fully appreciate the sensuous tones thrumming through her body, from within and without. Behind those closed eyes she sees the shapes all around her, ambiguous fleeting shadows that grow more solid with each beat. They do not dance. But they do flow.
...this is suppose to be suspenseful, a lead up to a horrific moment and it's falling flat.
'sensuous tones'
— Feb 01, 2024 07:41AM
...this is suppose to be suspenseful, a lead up to a horrific moment and it's falling flat.
'sensuous tones'
Meredith is a hot mess
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The reviews that point out this is written in a whimsical tone, also comes across as ya are true.
This isn't hitting
— Feb 01, 2024 07:38AM
This isn't hitting
Meredith is a hot mess
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Now he welcomed the shadowy cover of the old trees, the whisper and rustle of leaves even though the hot air was heavy and dead, the steady thump-thump of the festival beyond the hill sounding like a frantic heartbeat, and the smells of the forest. He’d been to a hundred woodlands in his lifetime, maybe more, but none of them felt like Valhalla.
More description, this is what I mean, it's not letting up
— Feb 01, 2024 07:29AM
More description, this is what I mean, it's not letting up
Meredith is a hot mess
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The descriptions are bothering me:
Nettles kissed his bare shins and calves and left their familiar tingling sensation behind, soon to develop into a more painful itch.
I'd never describe brushing past a nettle as it 'kissing my skin
— Feb 01, 2024 07:26AM
Nettles kissed his bare shins and calves and left their familiar tingling sensation behind, soon to develop into a more painful itch.
I'd never describe brushing past a nettle as it 'kissing my skin
Meredith is a hot mess
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I'm not liking this. The writing comes across as amateur and it's giving self-published vibes
— Feb 01, 2024 07:21AM
Meredith is a hot mess
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Makes me want to rewatch The Beach with Leonardo DiCaprio.
— Feb 01, 2024 07:12AM
